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Harumi is a straight girl who lives in a world full of lesbians where she feels completely out of place.

Her only consolation in her lonely world is Yuri, her internet boyfriend. However, she is going to start university and has not yet been able to see him.

However, what she doesn't know is that her "online boyfriend" is actually a lesbian girl named Yuriko who, because of her masculine attitude, her bad company and her bad situation at her house, she feels down and out of place in the world. For her, the only comfort from her is Harumi. But she knows that her love can never be more than platonic. That is why she always refuses to organize a meeting with her.

Finally, what neither of them knows is that, in fact, they may meet much sooner than they imagine. When that happens, what will their relationship be like? Will Yuriko be able to keep up her lies? And what would happen if Harumi discovered them?

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Hello everyone! This story occurred to me a few years ago, but back then I didn't have the means to illustrate it. I thought about making it in RPG Maker like the other games I'm working on. But this story is kinetic, so no gameplay is required, so forcing one to fit RPG Maker wouldn't have worked. And of course, making a visual novel in RPG Maker using other engines doesn't make any sense.

Fortunately for me, a few days ago I finally decided to give Ren'Py a try. I had already tried it a long time ago, but I didn't think I was going to learn it. Surprisingly, I've now tried it and it turned out to be easier than I thought. At least the basic functions, of course. So this is my first game made in Ren'Py. Don't expect any wonder, but I hope the story makes up for it. And of course, as I learn to handle Ren'py better, I hope the quality of this and my future projects will only get better!

If you have any opinion or comment, please write a post and I will answer you as soon as possible, I will only be late if I am sleeping or on the street!

You can also join my discord server. We are a very small community, but you can help make it bigger if you want!

By the way, I'm not sure if the android version of the game will work. If someone plays it on Android and confirms it in a post, I would greatly appreciate it!

Credits:

Music:

Cool Cat Game Studio, daltonattig, Potion Audio


Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/CapkyGames

Discord: https://discord.gg/rnBMqZbCdQ

Updated 18 days ago
StatusIn development
PlatformsWindows, macOS, Linux, Android
Rating
Rated 3.7 out of 5 stars
(6 total ratings)
AuthorCapky Games
GenreVisual Novel
Made withRen'Py
TagsAdult, Anime, Eroge, Erotic, Hentai, Lesbian, LGBT, Romance, Yuri
Average sessionAbout a half-hour
LanguagesEnglish, Spanish; Castilian
InputsKeyboard, Mouse
LinksPatreon

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¿Cómo pongo en palabras cortas todo lo que pienso de esta historia? Pues bueno. ¡Esta buena¡ si, si esta buenísima vamos es prácticamente un drama que no deja indiferente y eso esta muy bien. 

Sin embargo tiene ciertos elementos narrativos cuanto menos cuestionables (SE VIENEN EXPOILER CUIDADO )





Haru la madre biológica de harumi, haruka y haruko tiene unos cachos enormes no se que tan necesario era incluir en la trama un elemento de ese estilo pero le daré un voto de confianza por que la historia esta a la mitad además de ser un problema con una solución muy sencilla y el de menos peso en la trama, teniendo en cuenta la nula participación de las madres en la historia bastaría con explicar que tienen una relación abierta o yo que sé el divorcio.

La relación de beso amiga entre yuriko y haruka es rara, haber esta bien explicada dentro de la historia pero me parece contradictorio poner una escena como la cita falsa entre estas dos, en donde yuriko se muestra como una chica genial con unos valores bastantes firmes para después ponerla tan “sumisa” entiendo la idea de mostrarla como alguien mas débil psicológicamente hablando pero a nivel personal no me convence.

Y la que a mi parecer mas peso debería tener en la historia. El acto final de la versión actual. Yuri entra a casa de harumi roba pertenencias de valor y aunque accidental yuri lanza a la madrastra de harumi por las escaleras tal vez no la mato pero vamos eso debería dejarle secuelas como mínimo, el momento en el que la confianza de harumi tanto en yuri como en yuriko debió esfumarse por completo o al menos estar muy resentida por lo acontecido, no se nota. Perdona a yuriko y deja que yuri solo se vaya como si nada, sin consecuencias solo porque supuestamente están necesitados.

 además del desacierto que es enfocarse mas en la confesión furtiva de yuriko que en un familiar lastimado o muy poco le importa a harumi su madrastra azumi o directamente se olvidó que existe...venga que un evento así no puede darse el lujo de solo terminar como si nada. .. 


Pero bueno. La historia esta muy buena y eso se lo reconozco aun con sus fallos tengo Fe de que el nudo termine de desenvolverse en el 3er episodio con las tramas actuales como (La relación de hermandad entre Yuri y Yuriko)  (La relación platónica entre yuriko y harumi)  (La vida delictiva de los hermanos YU) Y por supuesto (Los problemas internos entre ambas familias YU Y HA) para dar un final a la altura de la base en el 4to episodio.

¡Hola!

En primer lugar, me alegro de que te guste la historia, muchas gracias por jugarla hasta el final de la temporada dos. Voy a contestar a cada uno de los puntos que has dicho:

Muchas de las decisiones que tomo en cuanto a las relaciones es por el morbo, básicamente, para añadir contenido sexual al juego. De no existir esa relación entre Haruka y Azumi, por ejemplo, no habría habido ninguna relación sexual en la última actualización. Así que, a quien le guste, ahí tiene una escena entre ellas. A quien no, basta con darle a skip. De todos modos, en la tercera temporada se profundizará más en eso.

La relación entre Yuriko y Haruka fue también para añadir más contenido sexual a la historia. La justificación es que simplemente Yuriko estaba destrozada emocionalmente después de ver a su propio hermano y al amor de su vida besarse. En ese momento, todos sus sueños se rompieron, toda esperanza de estar con Harumi desapareció. Así que se le insinuó Haruka, que era lo más parecido a Harumi que iba a tener, y se dejó convencer.

Bueno, realmente, quien hizo todo el daño fue Yuri. Yuriko técnicamente no hizo nada malo a Harumi, es más, defendió a su familia del ladrón. Así que, sabiendo que Yuriko necesitaba el dinero, Harumi actuó con madurez y decidió dejar escapar a Yuri para que siguiera cuidando de ella. Quizás Harumi fue tan madura que no tuvo sentido, pero esa es mi justificación jaja. Respecto a lo último que dices, había que dan algún cierre a la temporada jaja el cierre no podía ser que se quedaban hablando de Azumi y no tenían una conversación final, tanto entre Yuriko y Harumi, como entre Haruka y Haruko.

Muchas gracias por tus palabras. Espero que no te decepcione la tercera temporada :D

This game is too heartbreaking with the current content. Sadly I'll have to wait a while for conflict resolution. ):

I'm sorry the wait is being so long! But I have good news: between today and tomorrow I will publish the new update 0.5! Probably today!

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I hate futa content!

Okay? My games don't have futa content.

Is there futa content? and is the game still being worked on?

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Hello! Development is kind of stalled right now, but I'll get back to it as soon as I can. But no, it has no futa content.

Hello Capky Games I really want to play the game but somehow when I download the game its turns out to be different language do you know hw to fix it?

Hello!

I assume the problem is that the game opens in Spanish and you want to change it to English. Press the options you see in these images and the game language should change to English.


Hope that fixes your problem! If anything else goes wrong, please let me know.

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Oh thank you!

The Android version worked well 😊

No issues, but there was a feature I couldn't figure out how to use. Is it possible to hide the text box so I can get a better look at the pictures?

I'm glad it worked!

I'm sure there has to be a button. But I haven't tested the android version. So unfortunately I don't know :(

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I am a simple person to please, and this has pleased me. I do like all the characters, i think the main character is a bit to naive but it has it's charm. The story being in the state it's in right now, largely unwritten/unreleased, has had the writer/storyboarder part of my brain going nuts with where and how the story can unravel. If you want I can share some of my ideas, but if not then I will be happily waiting for the next release of this story. 

Hello! Thanks for your post! The next update will be soon, I just need to finish with some pictures.

Of course! I'd love to hear any feedback or suggestions you have. I think the most important points of the story I have already decided, but I will take into account any ideas.

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ok, I've been trying to write this in a way that doesn't sound like I'm trying to take over your story. In saying that I have had no real success, so I will just write and you can take inspiration from where and what you want if you chose to.

 I love the lighthearted nature the game has. At the same time I think you could use that to your advantage, for example the scene with the gang boss really caught me off guard. The threat he implied about the sister really shocked me, the game before was girl troubles then the threat and back. What I mean to suggest is mix a pinch of salt in the batter, in other words don't be afraid to try darker subject matter. 

for example one potential story line I had running through my head was this. The sister told her brother that he couldn't date her and when he pressures her for why she could either have been honest or said because she wanted this mark to herself. If the second option was picked she would say something like " this way we can get double the money and you can hit another mark" or if the first one is picked she tells him that she has a huge crush on her, no further elaboration. Either option leads to the brother telling her to focus on family and ends with him saying something like " just stay out of my way on this one" to which of course she doesn't and the lighthearted problems ensue. This causes the brother to fall behind on the bosses payments. Eventually during one of the brothers best and closest attempts to get with girl, he cant get the sad look of his sister out of his head begging him not to do anything and right before he can go any further which his plans. He tells her about his sister's crush and everything else. At the same time a sad and dejected sister is walking home, brokenhearted and jealous. Then she gets pulled into passing van. The next day the brother is freaking out and is looking for his sister, and he eventually goes to the girl and asks if she has seen her at school. she says she hasn't and fearing the worst he calls the boss, and is met with the muffled cries of his gaged sister. Skip forward and when she eventually gets free and after resting for a bit, at the girls place since the mob don't know of any ties between the girl or the brother or his sister. The girl comes to check on her, and finds her sitting on the bed with her knees tucked to her chest. When she sits down on the bed, and before she can get a word out, the sister kisses her. After the kiss breaks the sister apologizes and starts telling her how she feels and every dirty little detail about how she tried to stop her from getting hurt.  


idk it was one of the ways I could have saw the story go and I think that it would totally hook anyone, just the sudden 180 from innocent girl drama to gang kidnaping and potential human trafficking. That if done right would demand interest and attention from the audience. 

ok, that was it for my suggestions for now. Sorry about the length and as I said before this is your story. The same story that I will be waiting for regardless if you take my suggestions or not. Thank you for your time.   

Hello!

Thanks for all your suggestions!

Yeah, since it's a hentai game, I was going to be +18 no matter what I did, so the story was planned from the beginning to be darker.

Like I said, the major plot points are pretty much thought of now, but your ideas are helping me think of one of the plot points where I think they'll fit in nicely, albeit changing a few things. I also don't want to do exactly what you say because the story would no longer be mine and because it would stop surprising you and whoever reads this when they played it because they would already know what would happen. Still, I'll see how best to use your ideas. Thank you very much!

Are the releases weekly?

No they are not, they are as soon as I can. And I'll try not to take too long for the next update!

Reading about making it fit on rpgmaker reminds me of this one

 

https://sirensdomain.itch.io/housechores

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Is this made with RPG Maker? Amazing.

If I come across as mean, sorry I don't intend to

If you can add tags whenever, then you should add the hentai tag when something that can actually be considered hentai is in the game but I love the story so far even if it is only like 10 minds long

Also make the whisper text a bit bigger

Also thank you for not make the android version a .rar, as apks are so much easier to install

Thanks for warning me about hentai tag! My problem with that is that it gives me a dilemma: the current phase of the game doesn't have any hentai yet. But later on there will be, so I think it might be misleading not to label it as hentai from the start. What if someone who doesn't like hentai starts reading the story because they don't see the tag and are later surprised when I add it?

Thank you very much for your opinion of the story! I'm going to enlarge the size of the whispers, sorry for the inconvenience.

I'm glad I got it right with the Android version. At the end of compiling the project, the result is a single file, that's why I decided to upload it directly without adding it to a rar.

You make a good point about the tag so instead you can just put a disclaimer either in the game or on the page that there is no hentai and just remove it once there is hentai